Monday, October 31, 2011

Call to Vote!

I have created a couple of alternate versions for the text of my animal book. Now, I need to decide which content/mood is the most appealing!

It would be really helpful if you could take a few minutes to read these three versions and tell me which you like best. Any feedback is appreciated and welcome. Keep in mind, these still need editing. :)

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Thank you for your help!
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2 comments:

  1. OneHundredThousandFigsDecember 9, 2011 at 4:53 PM

    All three versions!!!!!!! hahaha i'm no help... Although i must admit i really enjoy CONVERSATIONAL, i think this is most personable and entertaining for a child audience. AND conversational can be very poetic. I do love Educational too though and wonder if it would be too much to include a thumbnail index at the back or somehow incorporate it in as well. Plays to the creative children and nerd children - of which i was both! <3

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  2. Monica Hui HekmanDecember 9, 2011 at 5:20 PM

    Valerie, I was thinking just that! I'm planning to do a combination of poetry and conversational, because you're right, it's sort of a rectangle box thing. I've always liked the idea of an index with thumbnails too. The Charley Harper book I have contains a beautiful index. :)

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