It would be really helpful if you could take a few minutes to read these three versions and tell me which you like best. Any feedback is appreciated and welcome. Keep in mind, these still need editing. :)
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All three versions!!!!!!! hahaha i'm no help... Although i must admit i really enjoy CONVERSATIONAL, i think this is most personable and entertaining for a child audience. AND conversational can be very poetic. I do love Educational too though and wonder if it would be too much to include a thumbnail index at the back or somehow incorporate it in as well. Plays to the creative children and nerd children - of which i was both! <3
ReplyDeleteValerie, I was thinking just that! I'm planning to do a combination of poetry and conversational, because you're right, it's sort of a rectangle box thing. I've always liked the idea of an index with thumbnails too. The Charley Harper book I have contains a beautiful index. :)
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